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Post by noah on Jun 5, 2015 18:25:36 GMT
Marvel Vs DC BASIC INFO,Name:No-Zod AGE:15 GENDER:male SEXUALITY:straight FACTION: DC AFFILIATION:Hero ALTER EGO/SECRET IDENTITY:N/A APPEARANCE,PHYSIQUE:muscular HAIR:short black EYES: red ABNORMALITIES:N/A REFERENCES: Reference PERSONALITY,Positive: • Caring • Brave • easygoing Negative:
• oblivious • angery • not very bright Brief Description: Noah is a nice guy at heart even if it doesn't seem like it at first. He tends to zone out after long periods of time when he isn't doing anything productive with his time. This leads to him not being able to pay attention to anything and become oblivious to things. But that only happens sometimes. He tends to be a noisy guy and stick his nose over people's shoulders literally. Noah also has a potty mouth. He's a fat guy who loves food. Noah is a person who loves headin face first into danger if it's for entertainment or to help another. Because he just got out of the Phantom Zone, he isn't a very bright person when it comes to Earth relate things which can lead him to do things that can be considered idiotic. Noah got one of his father's worst traits his anger. Even though he is very calm, Noah will lose all sense when he loses it.
HISTORY, No-Zod was born in the Phantom zone on June twenty fourth. His parents were the infamous General Zod and his wife Feora. No-Zod spent his whole life in the Zone with his parents who actually cared for him and taught him about Krypton and it's culture, but wasn't a very good fighter and knew nothing of Earth. But when his parents were planning on invading Earth with the Warworld, he stood out of the whole thing which made them furious for not siding with their beliefs. When they left the zone he stood and waited. When they broke down the wall between the zone and earth he took the chance to escape in the confusion and away from his parents.
Powers and Abilities Powers
Power Name: - Self-Sustenance-All a Kryptonian needs to survive is solar radiation.
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Abilities
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Ability Type: Super Strength - x 2 Physical Strength
Ability Type:Super durability- Can resistant different forms and levels of lacerations, blunt force trauma, energy-based assaults, falls from great heights, explosions, the cold void of space, toxins and is immune to all known diseases on Earth. He is bullet proof, but can get throw by rockets and missles which do damage to him like superhuman blows.
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-Red sun -Vulnerable to magic -Vulnerable to Kryptonite
RP SAMPLE, RP SAMPLE GOES IN HERE, you may leave this blank if you're making an OC, RP sample is only needed for canons and should be written as if you're posting with that canon. This is so we have an example of how you're going to play the character. Remember this is an AU site.
OOC INFO,OOC NAME: Comicguy RP EXPERIENCE: 2 years FACE CLAIM: Ruby by Noah(Once posted please add your character to the FC list TYVM) |
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Post by noah on Jun 6, 2015 0:13:12 GMT
Done
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Post by Ruen on Jun 6, 2015 13:09:45 GMT
Pending - Just a couple relatively minor things.
One - Theres actually a spot near the top of the app thats actually supposed to have a 100x100 icon where name, age, all that is
Two - History - I say this because you have his altar ego name as valor, How did he come across it? Given he just got out of the phantom zone? Did his parent's just teach him about krypton and skip over things like fighting or anything else? What about it all makes it that brings this line out in his personality: "Because he just got out of the Phantom Zone, he isn't a very bright person which can lead him to do things that can be considered idiotic." His parents were educating him, so is it a matter of not understanding how some things work on earth? Is he illiterate and knows Kryptonian culture, history, and fighting? It feels like it needs to be flushed out a little more to explain some of these things.
Three - Abilities - Self-Sustenance, Super Durability, These need some explaining as they aren't already on the list. What exactly about him is self sustaining? Does it mean he doesn't need to eat, that he in some way regenerates, that he never needs to sleep, what? Super durability, are we talking like the energizer bunny, he just keeps going and going, he can take a beating and say "please sir may I have another", or are we going the route where a bullet hits him and does next to nothing, given he is a Kryptonian. That said if you are going that route that by the combat rules and all, things like this are tuned back a bit similar to early comic times. Your common thugs handgun may get shrugged off as at best an annoyance, but he gets hit by a tank round or a missile, he's gonna feel something like that just through sheer concussive force.
Just clear those things up a little and your good to go.
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Post by noah on Jun 6, 2015 13:44:30 GMT
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Post by Ruen on Jun 6, 2015 13:49:33 GMT
Accepted
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